You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter:
Tell them why you need to move the interview time.
Ask to change the interview date.
Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing in regard to change the date of interview which has been arranged for me on 5th July. As you know I am working at a small company and I am in charge of manager for the new project. Because of some reasons we have to complete the project before meeting the deadline. On the interview date in your company, I have to represent the completed project to parents company. This representation will be crucial for me because it would have positive impacts on my CV.
If it is possible, please accept my request to alter the date of interview. I know you have arranged a lot of interviews already and it would be difficult to change for you. I can do the interview on 6th July or any date you will determine.
I want to mention that this opportunity is so significant for me because I will be unemployed after I submit my project. I need to have a new job promptly because I am an undergraduate student as well as I did not get the scholarship.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Kind Regards,
Sahar Sharifi
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| 2018-07-02 | Mehdi.Babaie | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... charge of manager for the new project. Because of some reasons we have to complete the...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...July or any date you will determine. I want to mention that this opportunity i...
^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e unemployed after I submit my project. I need to have a new job promptly because...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, you know, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45128205128 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72903399786 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8900797487 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245414165525 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981120740987 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856102372569 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167777099522 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106757372702 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.