Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
Some people argue that people tend to consider in many options during this era. I believe that nowadays, the development of technology leads us to have more alternatives than in the past. This essay will discuss the relation between the rise of alternatives with technology in present days.
The enhancement of technology which keep increasing is able to widen the knowledge and perspective of its users. Deciding a choice can be supported by one of brilliant technology invention, named internet. Furthermore, internet could let people to gain some alternatives by providing enormous related information which can be browsed anytime and everywhere. In addition, creativity of people in technology also developed each year to generate new idea that means automatically generating new option.
For example, currently people tend to be more picky when they want to purchase a cell phone because there are more various specifications in compared to previous situation. Moreover, the phone’s reviews of brand, price, model, after sale service, and function which can be found on the internet are also able to become another considerations before deciding the most appropriate choice. Based on my experience, ten years ago, people were only familiar with Nokia and Sony Ericson as cell phone brand while people can find more than 10 popular cell phone brands during this year.
In conclusion, the belief of some society mentions that we are now having more options. I agree to this statement in refer to the improvement of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31147540984 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92603434166 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6733571741 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165214532208 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628404459069 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759542557119 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112262646069 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593822100377 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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