Using a computer every day can have a more negative than positive effects on young children. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, it has been noted that use of computer on a routine basis has adversely effecting young people in their elementary ages. In my opinion, I agree that excessive use of computer has negative impact on children. However, I also believe that computer plays vital role in acquiring modern education.
Today, almost every other child prefers to spend great amount of their time on computer, leaving limited for them time to have any physical activity during the day. Sports tends to improve immune system and overall health of an individual especially in early ages. Continuous participation in sports helps in toning of muscles and strengthening of bones. It also encourages discipline, punctuality and helps in building high self esteem and mutual respect. Children who prefers to find computer based activities more interesting are creating barriers for themselves to learn and grow in an healthy and effective environment.
In addition, from computers child gets quick and easy response with only one touch on the screen. They get desired results in less amount of time and by putting minimum efforts which in return encourages hyperactive behavior, impatience and lack of focus in children. They expect every other routine process to respond and function in this fast and less difficult manner so that they don't have to spend much energy and effort. Children with excessive use of computers show low observatory result of their surroundings.Nevertheless, we cannot fully ignore the positive impact of learning from computers as there are vast range of information available on almost every other subject.
Taking all the above mentioned facts into account, excessive use of any facility be it computers or anything begins to impact with negative aspects of that particular blessing. Discipline in life can only be taught to children by balanced utilization of resources available to them. Limited screen time will make it possible for them to know their surroundings better and gives them opportunity to spend more time with family and friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30581039755 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91275694766 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0875495359 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240298478615 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072128802912 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677216101799 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140939049851 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551729227021 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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