People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons.
In this competitive era, everyone want to become famous in whole around the world. People usually mixed their personal of professional life because they want to bring their name and fame. There are huge number of pros and cons of this notion.
On the one hand, it is always advisable to keep personal and professional lives separate, usually when people mix both, there is chances of one aspect to encroach upon the other remaining aspects. The experts believe that if we mix our personal or professional life it cause more stress and frustration. If talk about the life of celebrities, their personal and professional is mixed by media because the media is more interested to interfere their life and know that how they live and bring name and fame. Subsequently some corporate business like hi-fi society people organized parties and invited boss or heads of their companies in outside when head of the company attend the party, they give some compliments to the owner of the party so that they achieve high position to create good bonds with authorities which results the promotion.
On the other hand, this is well- exemplified from the experience of the man who used to be tensed and tired because the weight of work, he was carrying on his shoulders as a result he neglected his family and only focused on his work to attain materialistic possessions. It finally leads to complete the breakdown of the household. Due to work pressure become nor able to focus on family neither work.
To conclude, it can be reiterated that keep the personal and professional life separately however they have no capacity to manage their family as well as work if they join both can create adverse effects on the life of person.
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Suggestion: there are chances
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...ix our personal or professional life it cause more stress and frustration. If talk ab...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
... how they live and bring name and fame. Subsequently some corporate business like hi-fi soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85762711864 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61116863994 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.029284181 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268752260266 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105696519375 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116768682615 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163069747533 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111977899625 0.0609392437508 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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