Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial.However must make no effort to do so.why do you think this is happening?
It is true saying that "human being cannot live without Mother Earth,but planet can live without human being" although in this modern world one of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic does human beings give their importance to nature; preserving natural resources? In this easy I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some practical policies that could be implemented to curb this problem.
The first step is to understand why the importance of natural resources fall down among earthborn? Broadly speaking there are three reasons for this.The first and foremost reason is they have a lack of knowledge about preserving natural resources so they try to over use these resources. Apart from that they have huge desires in this modern world therefore, to fulfill their needs they put a large pressure to overcome their needs.one of the cause could be they have a heptic lifestyle so they always remain busy to get a huge earning.A survey was conducted by World Health Organization which indicate that seven out of nine does not try to preserve natural resources.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its cause.however, one option has to counselling the locals about preserving natural resources,and it could be done by creating awareness in the society.A successful epitome is the policies and programs that are engage by government to encourage the local citizens to take care of natural resources.
In conclusion,there are variety of different factor that led to make this problem worse while it may not be possibilities to find a complete solution of this,this could be solve by either change in government policies or work done by individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18661971831 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81887914727 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.658538418 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.428571429 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8571428571 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138987460088 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713232719761 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0181063753984 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818055415489 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133960726443 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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