Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to Increase the cost of fuel. To what extent Do you agree or disagree.
Plethora of environment related issues are caused by fuel consumption all across the world. Therefore, few people consider increasing the fuel price as prominent solution. In my opinion, I do not agree because this might reduce the number of cars on road but there are many other environmental issues which cannot be controlled by this act.
On one hand, It is believed that excessive use of transport media, like cars has affected the environment most. Thus, petroleum prices must be increased to minimize environmental damage. But it would be an unwise pinion. Elevating the fuel rates Will also increase prices of other necessary things. Poor, in particular, will find it difficult to overcome their expensive. Hence, the economy of the country will be affected.
On the other hand, chemical waste and solid waste also causes environmental issues. These problems cannot be addressed by increasing fuel price. Also, many electrical appliances like, refrigerators and air conditioners emit chlorofluorocarbon gases, which pollute the environment. These problems cannot be controlled by lifting fuel rates.
To conclude, I do not agree with this statement. In my opinion. Fuel is the need of time and increasing prices will not affect its usage. We need to move towards Renewable energy sources to overcome this issue.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 61
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- This pie chart below shows average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. 78
- Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping? 80
- Some people fail in school but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in particular, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95063666433 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2954901694 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9411764706 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2941176471 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167342844402 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054621805883 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497035831633 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106031185667 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303499991127 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.92 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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