You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
• say in general what you like about shopping in your area
• say what is wrong with the facilities
• suggest how they can be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the frequent traffic jams near central mall in city center which is one of the busiest streets in the city.
To begin with, City center is a favorite stop for all the shopaholic people around the city because it offers huge varieties of products at affordable price. I am one of the frequent visitors to the place because it is one stop destination to purchase all the household items. However, as the area is little congested and it is one of the busiest streets, the unavailability of parking space is a key contributor to this traffic. People without a choice have to leave their vehicles on the road while they are shopping. Thus, it is the time when as citizen we seek authorities’ involvement.
Nevertheless, there is a vacant and unused ground at the end of the street which can be effectively utilized to construct a paid parking for the shoppers. In this way, not only traffic problem can be addressed but it can generate revenue for maintenance of market and the parking both.
I look forward to hearing from you and your active participation in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, nevertheless, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83495145631 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83500132953 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8660227789 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118415488223 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469042244739 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508879053684 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768316927286 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532241384738 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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