Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you Agree or disagree?
We get a hefty salary but are we really satisfied with our job? In my opinion, doing a job that brings a sense of fulfillment at the end of the day is better than receiving a fat pay check for a stressful job.
FIRSTLY, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of achievement and fulfillment that money cannot guarantee. If someone is getting a high salary but is not happy with their job due to pressure and the work culture, this person will always be tensed and EVENTUALLY BE UNABLE to enjoy life too. On the other hand, pursuing one’s interest will be more satisfying even if it yields fewer returns rather than missing on living life to its fullest. For instance, a lot of painters made their career choices, not because of attractive income, but because they were passionate about painting. Hence, it is essential to be in a profession that you like RATHER THAN BEING IN ONE THAT only generates high income.
Secondly, when you like what you do, it keeps you motivated and therefore leads YOU TO PERFORM BETTER AND MAKE A successful career. In other words, job satisfaction and productivity go hand-in-hand. People who are passionate about their job are MOST likely to excel in their careers and achieve better results AS COMPARED TO those who run behind high salary and crib about THEIR job. For instance, M. S Dhoni Captain of the Indian Cricket team, had bagged a high paying government job in THE INDIAN railways before he joined the cricket team. However, he did not enjoy working there and decided to pursue cricket as his career. He faced many ups and downs but within a few years he was a part of the Indian cricket team. THIS ILLUSTRATES that though there are few hiccups at the beginning, PURSUING A CAREER IN WHICH OUR INTEREST LIES IS MORE BENEFICIAL IN THE LONG RUN.
To conclude, I firmly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high pay because it makes people happy and motivated. ONE WILL EVENTUALLY ATTRACT MONEY IF THEY ARE SATISFIED WITH THEIR JOB AND PUT THEIR HEART AND SOUL INTO IT.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78867924528 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65453392779 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2348198808 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.363636364 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234678589306 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912676600027 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819272453391 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146806935602 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960082957101 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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