You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how will the course be useful for your job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to an advertisement that appeared today in the newspaper for an advance excel training course with NIIT starting from 1st June 2018 onwards. I would be grateful if you could permit me to take up this training and help me in getting a scholarship from the company for this course.
Firstly, let me provide you with further details of the course , the course mentioned is an advanced excel course which will not only help me to perform my task easily and quickly but also would save a lot of company’s time and effort to perform the same given task. Secondly, the course includes hands on experience on creating MIS reports by using pivot tables and graphs which is the need of an hour.As we are struggling with lot of reporting issue , however this course might turn out to be a big time savior.
Finally, to take up this course I would require company’s support in form of scholarship or a sponsorship .The course fees is Rs. 5000/- only. I believe there are proper budget allocated in the company’s budget for employees development. I would be highly obliged to get a positive response in this regards.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully ,
Tejal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e you with further details of the course , the course mentioned is an advanced exc...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...and graphs which is the need of an hour.As we are struggling with lot of reporting...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e struggling with lot of reporting issue , however this course might turn out to b...
^^
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in form of scholarship or a sponsorship .The course fees is Rs. 5000/- only. I be...
^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...n form of scholarship or a sponsorship .The course fees is Rs. 5000/- only. I belie...
^^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'budgets'?
Suggestion: budgets
...5000/- only. I believe there are proper budget allocated in the company's budget ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y obliged to get a positive response in this regards. I look forward to hearing fro...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t a positive response in this regards. I look forward to hearing from you Your...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rds. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully , Tejal.
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d to hearing from you Yours faithfully , Tejal.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76168224299 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73777712015 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61214953271 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3925928531 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285982517563 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114816780703 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503389543075 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152360827016 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636132234754 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.