Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in this world. To what extent do you agree or disagree, with this opinion?
Languages play an imperative role for individuals as well as nations BUT it is not un common to see that many languages go missing each year. It is believed by few peoples that with lesser languages, living would be smoother and this issue is not much worthy to worry about. In my opinion, modern languages should be adapted to easily communicate with foreigners but native languages must not be forgotten.
On the one hand, The world with fewer languages Will bring enormous benefits to Its inhabitants. First and foremost, The people from different parts Of the world Will come closer And try to merge in others’ cultures. In the result, better understanding among the people Will establish. Moreover, This will help removing conflicts and hence the threats of war. For an example, Recently I witnessed an accident. An old man was walking through the park When he mistakenly hit The dog of a lady. Now, the man was Lebanese And was unknown to English. The woman started beating him While he was admitting his mistake And saying sorry. But due to language barrier, She couldn’t understand him. The old man needed to be transferred to Hospital Due to his bad condition. Secondly, The trade around the world Is extremely important to a country. If there are Less languages, Direct communication among foreign Businessmen will be easier. Thirdly, It will benefit Foreigners Going to other countries For different purposes Such as tourism. They will feel less troubled Talking to locals. Hence, It is evident that Life is smooth with fewer languages.
On the other hand, languages Represent Different cultures, Peoples and tribes. If They Lose Their language, they will probably lose Their identity. Also, The residents of a country Could be speaking A particular language For many years And it can be difficult For them to Leave And adopt Different language. Does native languages have Their own importance.
In conclusion, I will appreciate The adoption of modern languages As it helps better understanding Of other peoples And business as well, But importance of Native languages Cannot be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1325648415 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84682468724 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.486930981 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4347826087 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17391304348 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289511257942 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750893071292 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560686354311 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182844959873 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442984496891 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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