Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue.
Polygamy is a custom of having more than one wife at the same. It increase the divorce rate in the world. In the essay ,I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical polices that authority could implement to vanish this problem from society.
The first step is to understand why happened. Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this. The first and foremost is inCompatibility. To cute an example, one is educated and other one is uneducated. So these types of couple doesnot understand the emotions of each other. That's why weak bond present between them. Because they are opposite in nature and standard. ThatwThat why they feel unhappy. Apart from that community also make such type of rubbish rule in which men do more marry at a time. For instance, men are superior than women in Pakistan. They do marry more than one to increase the population rate of the nation. One of the cause of this could be family pressurise the adults to involve in polygamy. For example, the bond make between them are weak so that break easily and doesnot satisfied from each other. Last but not the least is communication gap . To illustrate, men feel shame to meet wife in friends circle as well as society.
There is almost certainly one one solution to this problem after given the complexing of its causes. However, one to make the general public aware of polygamy. It would be possible to make standard law . For example, if men want divorce ,it is essential for men to given 50% money to girl. The another solution is to give equal rights to boy and girl to choose your partners. By this way ,the bonding become strong between them. The best epitome of this family should not pressurise the men to do polygamy. At last government shouldrequire to makev awareness company to help people through seminor to tackle this issue.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this problem, it could probably be solved by implement of laws by the authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, broadly speaking, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73369565217 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51540178999 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529891304348 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3084765682 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5185185185 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6296296296 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094632370908 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251972739413 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378048307277 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710826680676 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411018543268 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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