Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. and whether you support them or not.
Undoubtedly, nowadays, people are taking parts in risky sports which are gaining popularity. For example, sports like scuba diving, bungee jumping, parachuting, and paragliding. Some people hold the opinion in favor; whereas, others have the conflicting views. In the below essay of mine, I would try to enunciate on the both the facts with my own perception.
To begin with, indubitably, sportsman participating in these sports are really courageous and people favoring them think that taking part in sports like scuba diving and bungee jumping would give them confidence and strength to overcome all the challenges in their life. Therefore, adolescents scare of taking risks in life should be encouraged to participate in these activities. Furthermore, there is lot of fame and money involved in risky sports like this. Thus, this may be the prominent reason that sports person are gaining interests as everyone needs easy money. By the contrast, others have the conflicting views.
As per them, sports like bungee jumping are risky and it is treat to humankind life in case any unfortunate event happens. Moreover, these sports need special attention from the learning perspective and expensive equipment’s which is not possible to buy by every individual. For instance, there are many deaths reported in Texas due to scuba diving.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, unsafe sports activities shouldn’t be promoted and if it is really gaining popularity, then proper steps and measure should be taken by regime, so that untoward events can be controlled. Additionally, other sports which give relaxation and healthy life style should be promoted such as football, badminton and swimming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s in their life. Therefore, adolescents who are scare of taking risks in life should be...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... reported in Texas due to scuba diving. . To recapitulate, in my opinion, unsafe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43984962406 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91966723936 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4216476952 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100186183239 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340153417206 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055606036699 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063643937778 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330650939233 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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