It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician
It is commonly believed that some of the children are come in the earth with the lot of talents like sports, music and so on. It is also argue that any children can be a good sports man and musician if they take necessary training from training center. In this easy I will explain both opinion and discuss my own opinion.
It is true that some children are born with the talents and they have talented in the sports, music and on the other area. Some of the people have good voice and they can sing well music. Some people have talents in sports and they are good player from their childhood. So they do not need training from the training center and they gain success in those areas. For example, few years ago I watch a singing completion in the television. Around 30 competitors ware attend that competition. But a poor girl won the first prizes. She did not training in the any music training center. She listen music and practice at the home. In contrast, most of the good players are playing in Bangladesh cricket team who did not take any training from their childhood. But now they are good sports person. Some of the people are god gifted. They gain success in their fields without training.
On the other hand, some believe that children who learn music and sports from their childhood to become a good musician and sports person in the future. Not all children are born with creativity. So training is one of the ways to teach the children on those fields which they like. For example, now a day lots of the training centers are teaches children on music, sports, dance and others activities by high professional trainer. As a result, children gain more knowledge on that specific area which gives them lots of opportunity in the future.
To be conclude, only small proportion of children have creativity and they have talents in sports, music and other area. But other children should work hard if they want to success in music, sports and other fields. Training is the way to create opportunity to reach their goal. In my opinion, children can be a good sports person or musician or others area if they take proper training in the training centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for example, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62953367876 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31750630175 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437823834197 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4581152756 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.48 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.44 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262159106775 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865635008151 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820017125406 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186943008821 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122164126259 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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