Some people think that air travel should be restricted because it can cause environment pollution. Do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and relevant examples.
give reasons for your explanations and use any relevant examples from your own life.
Polluting atmosphere due to domestic and international air travel, has sparkled the heated debate over last couple of years. Some believe that it should be limited in order to protect the environment from pollution ;others however, think the opposite and believe it should increase. I am in opine with the latter view and give my view point as under.
Air travel has been expanded due to globalization impact in recent decade. It employs major section of the country and minimizing it, may lead to some harsh employibility issues. It can also affect the tourism and travelling business adversely globally, as for some countries tourism is a major source of income. for instance in India when Kingfisher Airlines shutdown its operations, it had left many people unemployed and the unemployment rate has diffused to a great extent for some years.
On the other hand, It is argued by some that air travel leads to pollutive environment, which is not fully right. Other means of transportation within the country also leads to massive milieu pollution and damage to ozone layer. This means that hey release the toxic gases directly to the atmosphere and that can be more fatal. While the airplane releases the toxic gases above the ozone layer and that it is why it impacts environment far less than traditional transportation options like busses and cars.
In conclusion although air travel has limitations, there are ample advantages of ramping and proliferating it. vis. more tourism which succinctly lead to higher income for country and high employment. Therefore I disagree with the notion to limit the air travel.
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- Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on earning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.Do you agree or disagree? 84
- You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job write a letter to this friend. in your letter- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college- explain 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13533834586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78069469527 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3936106749 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158999288929 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535671620886 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360335239439 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945717033758 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252942052046 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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