In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
SAMPLE ANSWER
Many technological breakthroughs have been already made in the field of agriculture, but there still are many people who are in need of urgent food. In this essay, I will explain some reasons and suggest a possible solution to this.
One of the reasons for the famine is that crops are unlikely to grown under harsh natural conditions like deserts, and it is likely that embedding innovative agricultural technologies, they can grow and feed themselves. However, the fact is they might be unable to access or purchase these technologies as they are developed and owned by developed countries. Of course, they can be transferred as international aids but more often as political advantages for other benefits. Many starving countries such as African countries let their people die of hunger rather than receiving those aids. Therefore, the solution would be not out of developed countries’ hand.
There also other reasons for food emergency around the world. First, natural causes included natural disasters such as droughts and floods destroying crops and resulting in food shortages. I think the urgent action, in this case, is food aids. Second, the crop production in previously stable fertile areas has been severely stifled for years by the conflict so that people lost their livestock, flee their homes and then starved. There would be no better way than the conflict coming to an end by diplomacy perhaps.
In conclusion, many people believe that technology in agriculture would create a future without starvation. However, I think that technology seems to be a long-term solution rather than the more urgent cooperation of countries to appeal for aids and stop the conflict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25912408759 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83870527572 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9219934507 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178748945395 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618648053269 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497517906339 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116928664709 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071818381512 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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