Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Decreasing crime rate, a significant indication for countries level of safety, is a heated-up issue. Some people advocate that prolonging the sentences period for prisoners is the optimum solution; however, the opponents reject this notion, believing that there are other ways can be introduced to reduce this alarming rate. I am supportive of the opinion that alternative actions are more beneficial for both. This essay will discuss, firstly, the thoughts of reducing rate by imposing longer sentences, and secondly, the alternative ways that can be taken, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
One of the major aims for all governments is to reduce the rates of crimes in their countries, as the low rate of crimes leads impacts positively on nation life. There are strong laws and rules to be followed by all nations, but there are still criminals who break these for their personal benefits. Therefore, some accusations lead to put its offenders into jail for long period to avoid their deterioration effect on societies. For example, Life sentence is recently being accepted by several countries on those offenders who convicted by premeditated murder and rapes where in United states of America was the first country to introduce this law.
On contrary, Opponents thinks that if countries applied other sentences rather than increasing the duration for prisoners, it would be more beneficial for both, prisoners and country. Criminals can be assigned by some work which will help him in his future life, and country economy can be benefited by using this huge manpower in country development. For instance, some countries allow the prisoners to work in infrastructure projects such as roads and flyovers where in Egypt and its desert areas.
To sum up, the long sentences might be one of the reasons to lessen the measured rate of crimes; however, more can be better as a solution to the country, individuals and prisoners themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To sum up, the long sentences might be one of the reasons to lessen the measure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21337579618 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.805848158 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.314848017 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175532935246 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704630956594 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623273249701 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11012532583 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884809713677 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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