Some people claim that not enough of the waste form home is recycled. They say that The only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think law are needed to make people recycle more of their waste ?
Nowadays, recycling rubbish is problematic issue that affect throughout global. Some people say that there need law's regulation in order to recycle garbage. I am going to discuss whether enacting law is barely method to reproduction.
Firstly, recycling waste is one of the most crucial thing. There are plenty of kind waste, including toxic waste, chemical waste and house hold waste. As human population is increasing, household trash is rise. On the one hand, governments should enact law to use again trash. By implementing about law waste, people tend to be more responsibility for reusing rubbish that pollute environmental. For example, for some countries that are most population than others, they would hugely produce waste which contaminate world. If law will be implemented, they would be controlled by the law.
On the other hand, no law is only method that grow reusing trash. Although there are no law, this way is also beneficial if governments explain about effective of the recycling waste. By this way, they should try to take advantage their citizen who can contribute to increase recycling rubbish. According to Japanese statistics, they learn how to discern garbage and how to recycle waste, in turn, causing to reduce domestic waste due to differentiate recycling trash.
To conclude, i believe that above two ways are important both enacting law and explain consequence of the recycling waste but nations should choose convenient method that appropriate itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30508474576 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81908024796 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7305368143 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306032461054 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100328652237 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655003970872 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180838965298 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355681310902 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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