Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is becoming like a fast car, which increases its speed every day, and humans are the passengers of this car, who actually make this car faster. Being happy and satisfied in such situation is getting harder and harder, but there are some reasons that people are finding their way of being happy, despite the increasing the speed of their life.
At first, one thing that has strong effects on our happiness is how we work and how we enjoy our work. Since one of the main goals of any individual is working and being a useful person for his or her society, working faster or even more than before can make him or her happier. Actually, this increase can be challenging for most people, and every person can examine his or her ability to be successful in that challenge, and thereby become happier. For example, if someone does a task every day and there would not be such big problems or difficulties against him or her, they will adapt to that situation, and after a while, they will not enjoy their job anymore, because it becomes boring for them. On the other hand, if they face some new issues, like doing more job or some challenging job, which needs to work quickly, they will solve new problems, and it makes them happier.
The other thing is that, although people are working faster these days, they use their leisure more productive. In the past, because people had more free time, they did not spend it efficiently, since they thought they have so much time. But today, because there is not so much time for recreation, people use their free time properly, like they travel or gather together more often. I remember when I finished my bachelor, I started to rest for a while, about two months, and then start a job or continue my education. The two month relaxing was very satisfying, so I decided to extend it for four or five months. But, after two or three weeks, I started feeling bored, and I was tired all the time, I did some works in that period, like going to the gym or part-time teaching at an elementary school, but I did not have a regular and productive job. So I decided to end my vacation and back to work, which makes me become more satisfied.
In the end, one way, and probably the best way, of being happy and satisfy is working and facing new issues, especially the work that we like, so in the case of more working there will be more challenges and more ways to work out these challenges. Although, the speed of work should not increase that much, so we cannot enjoy our free time, or even have enough time to do our regular job.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ue my education. The two month relaxing was very satisfying, so I decided to extend it for four or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45859872611 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26782602426 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490445859873 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.078027015 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4375 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100886388208 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411116627453 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398200358749 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677821712529 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263399891963 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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