Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?
Breakthroughs in technology have made individuals available every moment, which has enabled one to be contacted at any moment by an employer or a personal contact. Although this trend has some benefits for people and society as a business, there are some flaws too which are being overlooked, virtually by a large tranche of the populace, this essay is an attempt to shed light on both aspects, and deduce a plausibly whether it is a propitious or not.
Considering the facts that being accessible perpetually brings ease for employers while in absence of a worker, therefore, one may be contacted in case of urgency or to resume an unfinished task. For example, it is often observed in private companies that work-officials calling those on holiday either to update their tasks or to ask about previous ones. Similarly, it implies in personal life too, as one is contactable in case of an emergency arisen to family or relatives.
On the contrary, staying reachable persistently with mobile technology poses some health and safety risks, which have been evident in various cases reported worldwide. The explosion due to excessive usage of smartphones, for instance, had been noticed in various regions across the globe. In additions, the radiations, emitted during calls, from mobile phones are causing awful diseases such as cancer.
Furthermore, it would not be hyperbole to say that due to advancement in communication people are addicted to the devices such as electronic tablets or smartphones. As a consequence, the social life of members of the public has been confined to certain boundaries, and it induces psychological disorders such as stress and anxiety.
To summarize, I tend to believe that though there are a plethora of benefits, remaining procurable on mobile phones, the drawbacks such as health threats cannot be ignored, hence, it poses to be more negative than a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21682847896 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0098166108 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9763580469 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.545454545 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129173899289 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415026580539 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377304994913 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618202005919 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429573814094 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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