Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr Lee,
As you know that I am about to complete my Graduation for MBA, from the Ohio University, I would like you to grant me leave for few days, let’s say for two weeks as I would be appearing for my final exams for my Masters Degree. I would need some quality time to prepare myself for the exams, in order to achieve gigantic scores.
Along with that, I would totally stood up with my onus and duties for my work and will keep all my tasks updated from home whenever I would find some leisure time. After getting back to work I will work for overtime and weekends to recover my work when is left during these days.
Furthermore, my qualification will really provide some fruitful results to our company, as I would be certified to get some authenticated research in the field of Marketing and will consequently provide great benefits to our company in terms of Marketing Strategies.
Looking forward to have a positive response from your end!
Thanks
Abc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...let's say for two weeks as I would be appearing for my final exams for my Masters Degre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'stand'
Suggestion: stand
...es. Along with that, I would totally stood up with my onus and duties for my work ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...arketing Strategies. Looking forward to have a positive response from your end! T...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, look, really, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68390804598 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54062643183 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.034238546 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 4.34317383033 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18954123335 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928356722843 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133709375981 0.0603063233224 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11099620132 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227346367386 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.