With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
As world’s population is increasing day by day, getting food for everyone is becoming a huge problem. There is one probable solution to this problem and that is GM foods.
Undoubtedly, with this rate of increasing population society is facing many problems. These problems are not on personal level but on national level, for example, low GDP, low literacy rate, poverty and the most growing problem is getting food for humongous amount of people. Scientists and people are in continuous search of finding a way to solve this issue.
One of the new solution from technical side is GM foods. This is to grow food genetically, in a layman language it is to grow food which will provide nutrients like the original one but will be grown technically. It will not be wrong to say that GM food is to create replica of original food. But scientists should understand that there is a vast difference between both of them. The nutrition one will get from food cannot be obtained from synthetically generated food.
Need of an hour is to generate awareness among the people regarding the problems that are being born with increased population. It is understood that it will take time for these measure to achieve paramount success but the solution which is available is not feasible. Increasing population is a big concern.
In my opinion, creating duplicate food will only give energy to a person’s body for very less time. It can not be compared with the nutrients one get from food. Create awareness for increasing population, make sex education compulsory in educational institutes, organize campaigns, shows, rallies so that people get to think on this alarmed situation. But feeding synthetic food to people is not a very reasonable or smart solution. Always remember, If there is 1% scope of improvement in anything, then that thing can surely be achieve with regular efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00634920635 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82937120149 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9380789872 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6111111111 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243846925744 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828953066098 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502022925621 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144350643181 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407778576406 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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