The Internet has changed the way we interact with each other now compared to in the past.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
You should write at least 250 words
Communicative channels have evolved over the past few decades with the latest introduction being the use of web-based networks. There are some who believe that online modes of communications have changed the way people connect with each other in contrast to their previous interactions. This essay will discuss in detail how this change brought about various benefits while looking at certain drawbacks.
The most crucial benefit of a web-based interaction is the speed with which it connects people with each other. Unlike earlier, people across the oceans are not only able to hear but also see each other, that too in real time. For example, Skype enables families to get connected to their loved ones, who can see each other while talking and this has become the most preferred forms of communication as on date. Another important advantage is the cost effectiveness of this medium. Despite being able to project images and transfer data in a matter of seconds, the charges are cheap when compared to calling through a phone which even today costs huge money. For instance, the user only needs to subscribe to internet every month depending on his usage pattern and all other facilities are made available to him without extra cost. Therefore, internet has made life convenient for one and all as against the traditional forms of interactions used previously.
In contrast, there are many reasons which do not make the use of online interaction the best channel for communication. The biggest disadvantage is the lack of social life as people prefer spending too much time indoors on the net instead of making friends and socializing. For example, an article published in The Times in 2017 stated that more than 30% of adults do not interact with their neighbors but are logged into an online system to chat with people in different countries. In addition, too much of web-based interactions are proving to be extremely harmful to children who prefer sitting at home than indulging in physical activity. This is not only hampering their physical growth but also their mental development. For instance, children nowadays do not hang out with friends and explore their surroundings. Instead, too much time is spent infront of a computer or a gadget which numbs their mind and affects their growth.
To conclude, there is no doubt that internet has solved many problems with people who want to stay connected with others at a cheaper rate. However, overuse of this has certainly affected our society, including adults and children, making it necessary exercise self control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, no doubt, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09669811321 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66219891974 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577830188679 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0553183734 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.736842105 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210114730909 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646781692455 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437645024799 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134963483761 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041377442096 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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