wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness to what extent do you agree
It is rightly said that being happy does not always mean that a person is wealthy. Happiness is something which energizes our mind and gives us real joy.Some people opine that cheerfulness open its arms in front of rich people. But it is not true. Money can be used to buy luxuries but it does not assure us to enjoy these expensive luxury items. I do believe that the real joy lies between the satisfaction and simplicity.
To initiate with, there are multifarious factors by which an individual feels happy without having much money. Firstly,when a human being helps others who are in need,it creates a chain reaction of positive thoughts.He feels satisfied from his inner soul.It also gives joy to the beholder. Secondly,a person considering liberty as a social contract rather than a personal affair, less chaos are created. Which further results into better human to human understanding adding to happiness . Thirdly,when it comes to family's issues which can be of any kind like financial or emotional, they must be dealt with proper understanding and care they will further result into happiness. Eventually,if the needs are minimized then all the issues will be resolved by their own. There will be no lust for earning more which will add to alleviation of negativity and stress.
On the flip side,it is an undeniable fact that money is essential to make both ends meet.But the notion which describes wealth as a prime factor for joyful life seems to be meaningless. A person can buy a luxury bed, an expensive quilt, a highly facilitated room but he cannot buy a sound sleep. Same applies in the case of happiness. Napoleon was a famous personality but at the end of his life he confessed that he had never enjoyed even six single days of happiness in his whole life. He was too rich to buy everything. On the other hand Helen Keller, who was blind, deaf and dumb from her childhood found life as a greatest blessing of god.
Laconically, it can be inferred that as a famous aphorism stands "Money makes the mare go", it can be considered right to some extent. Money is something but not everything. True happiness resides in our good actions and our decisions not in wealth. So we should always try to be just in our actions which will further add to our happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7904040404 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70031768031 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588383838384 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1585158782 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2272727273 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819146529254 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253187333254 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342749192433 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564390849294 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344535891116 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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