It is said that adulterated food is the key reason behind deteriorated health of all age groups masses. How far you agree or disagree.
Adulterated food is a kind of food whose quantity has been increased with the addition of some other substance. This particular topic asserts that, Is deteriorated health of all people; caused due to adulterated food or not? I am totally agree with the statement and shall explain the same in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are three types of food adultration, first and foremost is intentionally food adultration. It meant that some people mix harmful ingredient in food because of their financial gain. When they add up many substance then it increase the quantity of product. A good epitome of this could be milk of verka, in which they intentionally add harmfull things so that quantity of milk increases and it lead many death in India.after some time the milk was stopped to sold in markets.
Probing ahead, another form of food is unintentionally food adultration. This type of adultration is result of ignorance or lack of facilities to maintain food quality. They may be caused by spill over effects from pesticides and fertilizer. For instance, farmers mostly use fertilizer in their fields for better results but it actually, affects their crops indirectly.
Last but not least, Natural adultration, it happens due to presence of certain chemicals, organic compounds or Radical naturally occurring in the food which are injurious to health and nor added in food intentionally or unintentionally. Further more, it cause many diseases such as cancer, diabetes.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that the first nesseccity of life is food. Our food should be free from added preservatives, and should full of pure nutrients because one works hard and earns to satisfied once hunger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...o adulterated food or not? I am totally agree with the statement and shall explain th...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n food because of their financial gain. When they add up many substance then it incr...
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...When they add up many substance then it increase the quantity of product. A good epitome...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f verka, in which they intentionally add harmfull things so that quantity of milk...
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
... that quantity of milk increases and it lead many death in India.after some time the...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun death seems to be countable; consider using: 'many deaths'.
Suggestion: many deaths
... quantity of milk increases and it lead many death in India.after some time the milk was s...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...ly or unintentionally. Further more, it cause many diseases such as cancer, diabetes....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1618705036 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98530162213 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2575588566 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138972369168 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493649268217 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535669336523 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807633048899 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593988070356 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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