More and more fathers taking a break from their careers so that they can stay at home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full-time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It’s not a child play to make both ends meet, so I believe that working both parents can easily make it. Besides, the children care is first and foremost duty of parenting. I opine that taking a career break for children care by a father is good, yet the fact cannot be denied that mother always plays a better role to nurture a child.
There is no gender discrimination in a rapidly changing society. It is completely depending upon the circumstances when a father is taking care for children after their wives. For instance, if a mother is earning more in a reputed job then a father can take a break to do children care. However, no one can replace a mother ever who can care a child better than a father and anyone else.
As I agreed that initial parenting is a basic right of a child which can be fulfilled in a family by the parents only. In addition, when both the parents are working then a child cannot get proper attention and care, therefore lack of love and care can make him inferior. What is more, a proper feeding and hygiene would not be there which can cause health issues for younger one. Moreover, children without proper guidance, discipline can lead to the antisocial activities which can be avoided with moral values taught by the parents.
To sum up, at the early stage of life, parents care matters a lot but not the wealth which takes them away from childhood of the little ones. It’s true that money is essential which coerce both parents to earn more, but child care should always be the priority especially for mothers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ing care for children after their wives is completely depending upon the circumstances. For instance, i...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d better than a father and anyone else. Although, I agreed that initial parenting is the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, at least, for instance, in addition, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5035971223 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41795125613 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521582733813 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3588584409 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3076923077 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362649225228 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128518565171 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686870361358 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214842876554 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551573491363 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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