Essay topics:
The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculture land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990 .
The pie chart illustrates reason that influence productivity, while table chart gives information about degradation reason for North America, Europe and Ocean over 1990.
Overall, it is clear that The most significant cause was over - grassing, while other reasons was lower. For land degradation, the rate of Europe tend to an upward, while North America was smallest.
First of all, the percentage of over grazing was biggest by 35 percent to grade land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the biggest'.
Suggestion: was the biggest
... of all, the percentage of over grazing was biggest by 35 percent to grade land.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 33.7804878049 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 385.0 965.302439024 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 73.0 196.424390244 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27397260274 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.92301278569 3.73543355544 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69976191359 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 55.0 106.607317073 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.753424657534 0.547539520022 138% => OK
syllable_count: 117.9 283.868780488 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.169074452 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126725176203 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711074720512 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573043066569 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850776236095 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05994054971 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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