You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter:
1- Explain why you are selling the television.
2-Describe the television.
3- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear John,
It`s been so long since we have last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to tell you that I am selling some gadgets, including m new television, which you may be interested to buy.
Recently, I have moved to a new apartment, and it has a spacious living room. When I fixed my TV on the wall, I realized that it is relatively small to the area. I decided last week to buy a big high-resolution television which will be delivered this week to my flat. Therefore, I put my old TV on auction, if anybody wants it.
You know that I married last year, and the TV was one of the appliances which I bought while arrangement my flat. The TV was a brand-new model, and it had warranty service for two years which is still valid. However, I applied for an additional warranty service on its switches, as one of it was broken during the delivery.
I know that you have some business next week in my city. It would be better idea if you visited my on Monday after your duties. I would suggest that you inspect it, and that take it in your van if you bought.
Warm wishes,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33018867925 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50929209416 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3693822736 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233707961425 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785415779704 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115676103835 0.0603063233224 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154878744306 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128285990991 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.