Write a letter to the planning manager to inform him that you are unhappy with the council's decision to pull down the historic building in your area due to lack of fund
- why it is important
- how it is useful in future
- suggest how to pay for repairs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention my dissatisfaction with the council decision of destroying the city`s museum due to budget non-availability.
I have been a resident in the city over 10 years, and I accustomed to visit the museum regularly. When the council announced that they will shut down this historical building, I got shocked from that detrimental decision. The museum is considered as a prestigious building to our city. It has also a sentimental value to all residents.
The country has an extremely rich history, and all country`s monuments are stored and presented in the museum. Therefore, keeping the building open, many tourists will be seduced to visit and enjoy our precious historical pieces. It will also enhance the country`s economy and development.
A huge open area is located beside the museum, and it is owned by the ministry of arts. I would therefore suggest that you convert it into a paid parking, and that you fund museum repair works from the parking income. it will help also to secure any funds required for any future repairs.
I look forward to reconsidering the council decision.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...m repair works from the parking income. it will help also to secure any funds requ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19487179487 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07664101271 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4704593305 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9230769231 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185642549524 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542084940761 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424402234712 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931148019396 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511097327264 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.