asking about a course to help improve your memory
Dear Sir/Madam, At first please let me introduce myself. I am mahdi, 32 years old. I studied material science in college and I have worked in gas turbine field since 2010.
I have some problem about my short memory and I cannot remember the some important events, names and addresses etc. that have been related to before I years ago. This problem has been started after an accident with hit the head on 2013. After that my long memory has been very good but my short memory has been failed. Let me know your methods that you will use to improve this problem and what is your procedure for solving my special problem. How can I be sire about the effect of your course on my mind?
Moreover, I want to ask about the course fees and the payment methods? For example can I pay the course fees during the course with some steps? If I want to participate the course, when is the next course date and how long is it take to finish it?
Best regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ked in gas turbine field since 2010. I have some problem about my short memory...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... short memory and I cannot remember the some important events, names and addresses e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3595505618 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0825047799 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4676503373 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267946185787 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765020343143 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851694100742 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140503844964 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993586355619 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.