Task 2: Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is argued that it probably happens towards a country which can both have an enormous success in economic and have environment that has a clean sanitation. In my opinion, I partly agree with the idea. My essay will analyse several reasons in favour of my perspectives.
At present time, industry, which is possessing tremendous investments from enterprises, is the measure of development between nations. Almost countries which have a successful economy have the significant number of factories whose operations are having a negative impact on environment. Take China as an example, recently in Beijing, the capital of China, the air pollution rate is considerable increasing accompanied with people’s healthy are witnessing a gradual decline.
However, a strong economy can be totally enhanced with a clean environment in a country. First and foremost, the sense of community must be premier. If people completely have accurate awareness of the consequences of polluted environment, the contamination will steadily be prevented. Secondly, authorities can hinder harms from reducing the quantity of factories and assembling identical manufactories.
In conclusion, I reckon that albeit mankind has concentricity and determination, we can never have both criteria at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...es. At present time, industry, which is possessing tremendous investments from enterprises...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er have both criteria at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, i reckon, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69587628866 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31936750887 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664948453608 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7281232199 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.454545455 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196507047639 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660522637512 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631867218298 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110653162984 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027136681427 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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