Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some people believe that traffic congestion and the shortage of accommodation could be tackled by relocating the large institutes from urban to rural area. In my opinion, i totally agree with this solution for some reasons
Firstly, the traffic problems would be solved by this idea. Indeed, because of the companies's location in the city, a huge number of the employees from the neighborhoods must arrive in the urban to work, resulting in the increasing of the vehicle in the rush hours, which is a major cause of congestion. Moreover, the tremendous loads of the means of transport also poses a threat in the damage of traffic system, For instance, when being under the more pressure of the vehicle, not only roads but also public transports face with the overload problems, which make them downgrade seriously.
Secondly, by relocating the big institutes to the countryside, there would be some enhancement in the accommodation for the citizens. It is a fact that these factories take a lot of spaces, which could be used to construct the houses and apartments for population. For example, a factory need average five thousand meter square to put its machines and equipment, meanwhile, with this space, the government could supply the accommodation for at least 1000 people. Thus, this is an effective way to deal with the housing issues.
Generally, with the population explosion and the migration from other areas to the city, relocating the factories and their employees to the rural area could help the government solve the dilemma about traffic and accommodation.
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Essay Topic:- People no longer use newspaper and television because the internet plays the same role. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology had its footstep in everyplace ranging from workplace to house. Individuals are likely to depend more on online world for entertainment rather than conventional methods. I partially accede to this statement and this essay will further discuss about it.
On one half, in past few decades people had started using internet to learn about news as well as other medias because it provides description of information with the help of both image presentation and notes. Therefore, it not only plays role of newspaper but also act as television. For instance, applications such as google which act as search engine so that just one click will provide informative data. As a result it saves time and money. Moreover internet is very handy matter, which can be carried to everyplace.
On the flip side, e-world being easy to resuscitate or time saving, though it is difficult for older masses to operate. So for them it is convenient to go for either rag or television. Furthermore, traditional ways for entertainment or fetching update of world needs no internet access as well as smart gadgets. For example, press like Times of India provides local and international news with image and data. In addition, television also furnish audio video information which is straightforward to understand.
To conclude, human uses internet for various purpose as it is handy and time saving but still is having few drawbacks like internet access, knowledge about it and so on. However, traditional method doesnot have special requirement thats why older people finds them as a boon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation could be tackled by relocating the large institutes from urban to rural are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14671814672 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85653755458 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6319705293 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.111111111 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212372689785 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859366322943 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450067098663 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124653810937 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161581024539 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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