The table below gives information on internet using six categories by age group. Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate.
The given tabular chart illustrates the knowledge about the internet usage in the six categories by seven age group. The data is calebroted in per centum which simple and coherent representated.
In the beginning, that teenagers were maximum use the internet for getting news while only 5% of teenagers used internet for searching the people. Moving forward, the people who were 20s and 30s had been prefer to online product buying as well as the minimum percentage of people who use internet for the searching people. Apart from this, other the teenagers or the oldest people maximum use of internet for the purpose getting news. Moreover, the people of 60s and 70s age group had used more internet research the product online 74% and 70% respectively.
In addition to this, the 81% and 52% had been using the internet by the teenager for the online games and download purposes. While the 0% uses of internet by teenagers for the product research. Moving ahead, the age group of 20s to 60s had been less using of the internet for the download. Furthermore, the age group of 20s to 50s used internet for online games where 54% 37% is 29% and 25% respectively.
Generally, it is evident that the all ages group maximum use of internet for purpose of getting news but on the other hand the minimum use of internet for the purpose of searching people by all age groups.
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- Some people think it is good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries as compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extent you agree. 67
- In some countries people prefer to rent a house for accommodation while the other countries people prefer to buy their own house Does renting house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house 53
- The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to ealier stages to enable adjustment. 73
- The diagrams below show the stages in the development of simple cooking equipment 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...he people who were 20s and 30s had been prefer to online product buying as well as the...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...had been less using of the internet for the download. Furthermore, the age group of 20s to 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, well, while, apart from, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75732217573 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51314361473 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443514644351 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.326349825 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.363636364 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195256582214 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10136629854 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528145272596 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143297716877 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171819559714 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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