New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
It is certainly true that, modern technologies have modified the method children spend their spare of time. However, I believe that there are more benefits than the drawbacks.
To begin with the multifarious advantage. Firstly, technology is a sophisticated source of entertainment.Due to this most of the children playing computer games.This is not only a source of relaxing but also full of information. For example, strategic games require players to be good at problem solving and be able to deal with unexpected situation hence, children who play these games can better their logical thinking as well as problem solving skills.
To be more precise, online information is a huge and eaisly available source which used by the young people and take lot of benefits. If they can able to brows the internet at a young age, they can start their learning process earlier and as a result can advance their knowledge as compare to the others which do not use to this.
Moving to the flip side of the coin, first of all, the main drawback is that children who enjoy spending time in front of the computer screen they follow the scendatry life style. Furthermore, lots of physical issues faced by them such as, overweight and weak eyesights.
In conclusion, there are some benefits of children consuming time on advanced technologies, whereas, disadvantages are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0704845815 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87915037461 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643171806167 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1681729636 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181005330999 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650702441764 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829288294898 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10329272067 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632010331267 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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