Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.You should write at least 250 words

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words

Submitted by nimafact on Sat, 08/04/2018 - 09:42

It is often argued that human being is struggling with too many choices. I completely agree with the idea that people face plenty of choices in today’s life.

There are several reasons why people have to consider multiple factors of how their choice would make a difference in their whole life. Firstly, with the advent of industrial revolution. The society has undergone considerable changes in terms of technology and the complexity of it. For instance, old people or in some cases middle-aged ones find it very struggling to do their online purchasing or banking procedures on computers. This makes it even harder for those who want to utilize and get to know to use the product in advance for their routine life.

Secondly, the impression of technology on costumers’ habits is one of the most important factors which has drastically affected their life. Nowadays the market makes it harder for those which are attempting to make a choice due to the variety of products available in the market, most specifically the products made in the same category such as mobile phones, computers, etc. In contrast, there were much easier choices to make due to no competitive market and no other choice to make in a specific category of product.

In conclusion, there might be some inconvenient situations that people in seek of their own choices, it might seem a bit challenging for them, and get to utilize the product available in the market. I believe that they have to keep themselves up to date and stick to the unstoppable train of technology.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96183206107 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8379601532 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7440672063 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120960412795 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481097526558 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357324563662 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860076313305 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429758922188 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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