The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be.
What are the reasons for this trend?
Is it positive or negative?
The expansion in business and tourism industry at global scale has made the world a global village where many nations are more identical in cultures compared to the past. In my opinion, I believe it is certainly a very positive shift but only to a certain extent as it has detrimental impact on cultural values and particularity which have made them unique in the first place.
The trend of cultural transfer becomes more aggressive after the industrialization when people started to migrate to different places all over the world. The rise of globalization, which has enabled people to interact with people from different cultural background for business purposes, acted as a prime catalyst to fuel the inter-culture interaction. Consequently, people started to explore various community all over the world, which has encouraged to adopt different traditions from these societies. Thus, without any realization, various nations became similar in cultures.
The cultural migration has surely strengthened the unity throughout the globe.
When people have same mentality, the chances of discrimination, which is major issue in many countries, reduce to a great extent. Moreover, multinational companies, which has business spread all over the globe will be benefitted because of similar culture throughout the world. For instance, Major companies invest around 50 million a year to improve quality of communication so that people from different background can communicate effectively. However, it is very dangerous to the individuality and originality, which is a beauty of the diverse culture. In addition, it has detrimental impact on tourism industry, which is only source of income for many nations, such as Nepal, because cultural diversity is a major attraction for many people. Thus, identical culture is nothing but a double-edged sword.
In conclusion, although cultural similarity motivates the world-wide unity, it is dangerous for individuality. Thus, people should be encouraged for multi-culture co-existence to make the world better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in the first place, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61538461538 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17565293001 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8503685108 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234865652711 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803739597328 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519278314574 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129195105701 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05147200841 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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