You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir / Ma’am,
I am writing in response to your letter sent on August 02, 2018, stating to accept a job offer in your esteemed company for the post of Senior Architect.
I am very unhappy to state that I am not in a position to accept your job offer as I am very much satisfied working for my current employer. Whoever I am today, I am just because of this job. My current job has helped me to explore my potentials and there has been substantial growth and improvement in my professional life by providing challenging tasks to me. I am not bound here to restrict my views to myself and this makes me feel more confident in taking major decisions for different project. I am very grateful to you for the offer but also apologize for the inconvenience of arranging a series of interviews which required so much of your staff’s time.
I hope you would understand my situation. Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully
Huma
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| 2018-08-09 | Huma Mohiuddin | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d so much of your staff's time. I hope you would understand my situation....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9086918156 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.351057096 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224650855064 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108791345078 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070964307362 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136241564026 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822051129995 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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