You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter
Say where you think you left the papers
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to some papers I have left in your hotel. As you know, the B.U.A company held an important meeting last week, on the 3rd of July, in your hotel and I made the major speech as the manager of company. Unfortunately, at the end of speech I was talking to my employees so I forgot to take my papers. I suppose they have remained on the large table in the front of the meeting room.
They are really significant documents for me because they are the result of efforts of our company during three years ago. In addition, I have a plan to represent them at another meeting which will soon be held overseas.
I was wondering if it would be possible to send them to me in the less time! As I am so busy, I won't be able to come personally. I would extremely grateful if you could send them by a taxi.
Thank you for your help and support.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-14 | reena arora | 73 | view |
- You have received a letter from your local video shop claiming that a DVD you rented is now overdue However you have already returned the DVD Write to the video shop In your letter Tell them which film the letter is about Explain when you returned it Tell 87
- An old friendis coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letterExplain that you are unable to comeFind out how long your friend is stayingin townArrange a suitable time to meet 51
- You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letterTell them how long you are stayingDescribe the type of acc 73
- Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 88
- Scientists agree that people ruin their health by eating junk food. Some people think that the best way to prevent people from eating junk food is to educate them while others believe that this won't work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...eft in your hotel. As you know, the B.U.A company held an important meeting last ...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting which will soon be held overseas. I was wondering if it would be possible ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, i suppose, in addition, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26857142857 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36701137664 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2721831099 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265186788425 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920247869666 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815631671346 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15484470952 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087588972968 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.