The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps representing way to city hospital during two years. First map illustrates the accessibility of road to city hospital in 2007 and second map shows road access in 2010.
Overall,there was a lot of changes happened during these three years specially,separation of public and staff parking.The bus station was also developed.
In 2007, there was a ring road which surrounded the city hospital.The hospital was accessed by only hospital road which run from south to north.There was six bus stops along the sides of hospital road. Car parking was the same for public and staff. There is a city road which crossed the hospital road from east to west.
In 2010,there was a little changes occurred like development of two roundabouts on hospital road. One roundabout was located near main entrance and other along city road. Main old parking was given to staff and another large parking was built near east side of the hospital. Six bus stops was diminished and new large bus station was opened along west side of the hospital road.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...,separation of public and staff parking.The bus station was also developed. In 200...
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...road which surrounded the city hospital.The hospital was accessed by only hospital ...
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...ital road which run from south to north.There was six bus stops along the sides of h...
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...ch run from south to north.There was six bus stops along the sides of hospital ro...
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...d new large bus station was opened along west side of the hospital road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79127089008 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.831951816 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247075567275 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131106529198 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117994633273 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182681508664 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155101829395 0.0819641961636 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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