In the world of internet, people write on internet about a product’s reviews and opinions about a service . Is it a good thing or bad thing?
The cutting-edge technology has provided people with different chances that they did not used to have once. It has made sweeping changes in every aspects of our lives. Meanwhile, it created virtual atmospheres on the Internet for exchanging our personal experiences about particular items or services. Despite the fact that some products’ reviews on the Internet have proved not to be reliable, I believe the full effect would be positive.
There is little shadow of doubt that internet reviews should not be taken as our main decision-making factor since not all of them tell us the truth. Some opinions belong to a group of people who are pessimistic. Hardly could anything make them satisfied when they always nag, feeling unhappy with what they have bought or been served. On the contrary, some people might be given money in order to give specific things compliments. They would overstate the quality of such items even if do not tell lies.
However, these are a small majority of opinions and the fact is that people’s reviews could be more advantageous because of a number of reasons. Firstly, an overwhelming majority of people’s experiences are trustworthy. Therefore, they might help us to find the most suitable option. Considering buying a sunscreen, as an example, people’s comments could be more helpful rather than the item’s description regarding what kind of shin the cream will definitely match. Secondly, factories would double their effort and make improvements in quality of their products if they were given bad comments. It is the same about services like hotels and restaurants. Finally, a part from negative reviews that help employers finding their mistakes, positive ones would be sources of motivation for them.
To sum up, although it is true that some people pass wrong judgments on the Internet about any product or service they have experienced, the overall result’s advantages outweigh its disadvantages. I would reaffirm my position that people could get the maximum benefit from these comments whether they are buyers or sellers.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-16 | Roxana Davarpanah | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ith different chances that they did not used to have once. It has made sweeping chan...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is little shadow of doubt that internet reviews should not be taken as our main ...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
... are trustworthy. Therefore, they might help us to find the most suitable option. Considering b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, kind of, it is true, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30538922156 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9174338507 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8638743979 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259750319915 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740158633758 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614188042177 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155946006699 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027079452311 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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