Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.
Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparisons where relevant.
The map shows two potential locations for a new shopping mall (S1 and S2) in Brandfield.
It is clear that S1 is in the north while S2 is located in the south-east. Additionally, S1 has an advantage of proximity to the housing estate and the city centre.
As S1 is situated between the housing estate and the city centre, it means that this site would be within easy reach of a large number of potential customers. The existing road and railway already pass near the planned location.
It is seen that the golf course and park occupies the west of Brandfield and the river passes through the centre of the city. However, neither of these features affect two proposed sites. S2 is also conveniently situated near the city centre and it borders on an industrial estate. It is relatively far from the housing estate, even though there are available road and railway which provide access to this site.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...this site would be within easy reach of a large number of potential customers. The existing road ...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'railways'?
Suggestion: railways
...ven though there are available road and railway which provide access to this site.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74050632911 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55057009063 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4148274431 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199259583493 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829187776055 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866293104182 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141600746239 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967786432622 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.