You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that
you will he charged $70 which will he taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank.
1- You know that this information is incorrect
2- Explain what has happened
3-say what you would like them to do about it.
1-You should write at least 150 words.
2-You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
3-You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to the letter that I have received from the bank about the account charges on my last overdraft transaction of $240.
I have noticed that the charges are $ 70, and it will be deducted from my account by the end of the month. When I reviewed my account`s statement and bank agreement, I realized that the amount of the charge does not match the actual calculated rate. A problem may be occurred from your team while putting the interest figure.
I had an overdraft last month from the same account; however, I settled its relevant payments before my last transaction of $240. It may be wrongly considered by your team to add two charges of both overdrafts from this month. I have a copy from the previous bank statement, and the receipt of my payments for the charges.
The deduction will occur within 10 days from my account. I would therefore request that you review the attached receipts and previous statement, and that you ensure its considered by the concerned department in priority.
Let me know if you need any further information.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$70'.
Suggestion: $70
... I have noticed that the charges are $ 70, and it will be deducted from my accoun...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86597938144 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71494754479 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1546867686 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349670854075 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132187523085 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461735884739 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191212224533 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441744805529 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.