You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for where you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Sam,
It`s been so long since we last met. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing in regard to our agreement for looking after my home and dog during my vacation.
You know that this year was very stressful, and I have been through a lot of tasks at work. When I decided to go for long vacation abroad, I could not have better choice than you to take care of my dog and home. I decided this vacation to travel out of the country. To be exact, I will be staying at my brother house in Milano, Italy. They have a wonderful weather during summer, in addition to fascinating landscape.
The important task for you during my leave is my dog. It needs a special kind of food where I stored at the kitchen on the shelf. Enough pet`s food is available to cover the whole duration while I am abroad. I recommend also that you take it for a walk twice a week to maintain its mode.
You know that I have a small swimming pool in the garden. I would therefore request that you monitor the water daily, and that you ensure the smooth re-circulation of the water to avoid any bacteria occurrence.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, kind of, you know, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41588785047 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3959206677 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2190572277 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194064772612 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586695482491 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471844092766 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117876554598 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152027105153 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.