What is the best invention of the last 100 years, the computer, the antibiotic, the airplane explains why
The importance of invention, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of new invention has sparked the controversy over the potential influence of impact of this trend on people over the years. It can be said that computer is one of the best invention throughout the world due to numerous benefits. This essay will elaborate how computer’ invention is vital and how it makes people life easier as compared to past years and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why computer is giving myriad of benefits, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that not only it provides accessibility of information with single click, but also has some other features. For example, storing the data, receiving various files and so on. Hence, it has become an essential tool every aspect of life.
Another key justification for upholding this key notion is that it has internet connectivity, which gives a wider range of knowledge all around the world and also provides what have done in the field of antibiotic to move forward. For instance, research and knowing the airplane routes cannot be possible with internet or computer. Hence, it is precious gift given by new technology and having wonderful features.
What has been discussed above, it can be said that the impact of computer is prominent, although the way it changed human lifestyle should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...roversial. The substantial influence of new invention has sparked the controversy over the po...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tal and how it makes people life easier as compared to past years and thus lead to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1125 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82596775459 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6375 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.016316556 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117015450034 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360636363544 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358260610692 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0559127290333 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287331875577 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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