Now a days,people are living alone in cities.define reasons behind this trend.Is it positive or negative?
Lifestyle had undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades.Presently,some masses are living individually in big cities due to many reasons.Here, i would like to account the causes and positive and negative outcomes of this trend.
There are manifold causes behind this concern.To embark with,people are living alone for getting quality education.To exemplify,juveniles have to go far away from family to get better education and they have ti go for their higher studies.Therefore,they get better knowledge and they can become professional in future.Moreover,people are living individually due to work opportunities.They go to there for better career and modern amenities and also have to fulfil their dreams such as singing , dancing and so on.As a result,they can follow their passion and also can get benefits of modern facilities.
There are various positive impacts of this trend.Initially,people can devolp many skills .for instance, if they are living far away from family then they have to do work on their own such as cooking,household activities and so on.As a result,they can upgrade their skillset and became independent.Apart from it,they can live their dream by following their passion and get better opportunities to complete their dreams.Therefore, they can get better facilities in future ang get satisfied.
On the flip side,it has some negative impacts.Initially,there is a communication barrier in between family and individual.To exemplify, a person do not have enough time to share thier view or ideas.Hence,their relationship bonding become weak.Moreover,individuals lost a chance to learn many cultural and social values and they became introvert personality.Thence,they are unaware of these values.
To recapitulate,people have to live alone due to many reasons. However, they should maintain balance between professional and personal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79783393502 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.29325852162 2.80592935109 153% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.169879657 49.4020404114 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.666666667 106.682146367 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.1666666667 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136978736978 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868560525445 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063715288343 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918926524012 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437848889237 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 50.2224549098 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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