Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
There are many differences between the life-styles of younger and older individuals. While some people believe that older people enjoy life more in comparison to young ones, I am convinced that young people enjoy every moment of life more. I feel this way for the reasons explored in the following essay.
To begin with, because young adults indulge in a variety of activities that elders don't, they enjoy life more. More specifically, the elders are constrained from participating in joyful activities, such as skiing, climbing or sky diving due to the risk associated with these sports and the health issues that they have. However, young people are not prone to these constraints and as such they get to enjoy these forms of entertainment. In brief words, youngsters enjoy life more because of their health advantages.
Another reason to consider is that older people have the tendency to isolate themselves in their houses, which makes them less exposed to people and enjoyment. Statistics indicate that as people mature into an old age they live in quiet places further away from the society. Consequently, they feel lonely and out of place. In contrast, young people enjoy the feeling of meeting with friends, family members and new companions as frequently as possible. This, inevitably, leads to a happier life.
Moreover, youngsters enjoy life more because they indulge in one of life's greatest enjoyments- travelling. For instance, I, personally travel almost every month and enjoy contemplating different sights. However, my father cannot do the same thing due to his work and health issues. In other words, due to different reasons older people are constrained from the joy of travelling, which influences their overall life-style.
In conclusion, young people have a better life-style than elders do, because they indulge in a myriad of activities, they are exposed to a great number of beloved people and they travel as much as they can. Therefore, because of these reasons, I believe that they enjoy life more than others do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in brief, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22590361446 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70369036199 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1991462163 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3888888889 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418161020886 0.236089414692 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131809545308 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106837118173 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26226329681 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730602644014 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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