An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport,
but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain the situation
Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Julia,
How are you doing? I hope you are all packed and prepared to come over and experiencing an awesome vacation here in Sydney. I provided a list of cool activities that we should do during these days. Good news, that my office approved the leave day request for a week. However, unfortunately, it will start one day after your arrival. It means, I sadly can't be at the airport the time you will arrive.
I was thinking of giving you direction using public transports when my roommate suggested picking you up at the airport. You know, she is Chinese with a little difficulty to speak English however, I believe, she is ad much adorable as you. Hopefully you feel comfortable with her. Anyways, how's your family? They will be amazed seeing you here. Don't forget sending postcards. How I wish your sister, Jesse, also could make to come. Can't wait to see you here.
Love,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Julia, How are you doing? I hope you are all ...
^^
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y after your arrival. It means, I sadly cant be at the airport the time you will arr...
^^^^
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: how's
...you feel comfortable with her. Anyways, hows your family? They will be amazed seein...
^^^^
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...y? They will be amazed seeing you here. Dont forget sending postcards. How I wish yo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...sister, Jesse, also could make to come. Cant wait to see you here. Love, Sara
^^^^
Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
... come. Cant wait to see you here. Love, Sara
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85443037975 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64109154043 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76582278481 0.622605031667 123% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3963478968 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1538461538 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292265059335 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905126432003 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701982993838 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231602943642 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308525994844 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.