Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports be really good for us ?
Sports can be played as an individual or as a team event. Some people argue that team sports like soccer sometimes result in violence and other forms of antisocial behavior. Although, this might be true to some extent sports play a crucial role in building a person's physical fitness and character.
Firstly, sports are a great way to stay fit and relieve mental stress. Team sports like soccer and cricket require extreme fitness and are also monumental in shaping an individuals character. For example, cricket is referred to as Gentleman's game because it is played with true sportsman spirit. Moreover, team sports help individuals acquire the qualities of team work, professionalism, positive attitude and mutual respect.
Secondly, sporting events are great for a country's economy. To illustrate, events like the World Cup and the Olympics provide employment to thousands of citizens in the host nation. Furthermore, these sports are instrumental in inspiring the young population to choose sports as a professional career. This is beneficial for the health and economic welfare of a nation.
Although, it has been evidenced that due to the extreme passion and love for their country, sports supporters have sometimes resorted to violent means. These can be easily controlled by the enforcement of laws by the government.
To recapitulate, sports not only help in staying fit they also play a monumental role in building a person's character. Thus, more people should indulge in sporting activities and government must play its part in ensuring that sporting events are organized peacefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s and are also monumental in shaping an individuals character. For example, cricket is refe...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...so play a monumental role in building a persons character. Thus, more people should ind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89633524146 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3114206566 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 6.9802955665 201% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419088424445 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145230369806 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950866027659 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22678804395 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929259572515 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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