People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Attitude can be defined as how a person behaves and interacts with others, and it would be an understatement to say that there are a number of factors that affect people's attitudes. Some say that attitudes are determined by the immediate situations a person surrounds him- or herself with, whereas some contend that the cause lies in the impact of the society overall. On the surface, both arguments seem plausible, but I agree that close surroundings have a greater influence on people's behaviors.
Admittedly, society plays a pivotal role in people's attitudes because as members of the society, people cannot avoid being affected by whatever occurs within that group. If the government decides to raise the interest rate, wage war against another country or enforce a new law, the nation's reaction of shock or bewilderment cannot go unnoticed. In some way, big or small, what happens in the society affects every person's life, inducing one to look at the world with an altered viewpoint. Even if the occurrence of an event doesn't impact people directly, they anticipate about the ripple effects that will ultimately cause changes in their lives. Therefore, people's attitudes are indeed influenced one way or another by acts in society.
However, the aforementioned support does not warrant the claim that immediate situation or surroundings have a lesser effect on attitudes. The close environment people surround themselves with have a much significant impact on their lives, because they have a tremendous effect on their feelings. Emotions change constantly, at every moment, and they are the driving forces one's attitudes. For example, if a person has just had a dispute with a colleague about a work matter and hasn't resolved it yet, he or she is likely to be frustrated with continuing his or her work. If, on the other hand, the company has decided to give raises for its employees, that person will feel better, and be much eager to work assiduously. People's feelings are critical factors that precipitate an alternation of their attitude, and these feelings are more greatly affected by immediate surroundings than the society.
Another close environment that affects people greatly is their familial background, namely, their upbringing. If people are raised in a loving household, it is highly likely that they will retain a sanguine outlook on life, and be more cordial to others. On the other hand, for people whose childhood experiences are limited to abuse and neglect of their parents, there is a high possibility that they will view the possibilities of future happiness as bleak. It is liable to cause them to hold unnecessary grudges against other people and show a hostile attitude when something small goes wrong. Familial background is important because it is the main element that forms people's perspectives, characteristics, and their attitudes. It lives with them forever.
In conclusion, even though society does play a vital role in people's attitudes, it has a lesser influence that immediate surroundings. A crucial part of a person's characteristic, emotions and familial background, impacts one's attitude towards others, and they should be looked at carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2690.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23346303502 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88797223923 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 849.6 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3937839321 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193567929436 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609385325936 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369950941202 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115825979603 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351740261193 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.