Write an essay about the main problems teenagers have in your country. Describe them, and explain their causes and suggest possible solutions.
Teenagers are the young generation who will later help the country to develop and moving forward. Everyone in this world all have the time when they become teenagers, and it is a very remarkable. Though teenagers play a crucial role in the society, they can also cause some serious problems due to their inexperienced personality.
First, teenagers are very hot-headed and they can't control themselves. It is clearly that most of the crimes today are from teenagers and a huge amount of them are caught by the police. For instance, the statistics that is calculated by the Ministry of Public Security has shown that the percentage of buglar and shoplifting has increased dramatically over the last few years, which mostly are the result of unthinking action of teenagers.
In addition, teenagers are also the origin of using prohibited drugs and drug dealers. Heroine and cocaine are two particular drugs which are used and also sold by many students at school. This is the most tough problem that many schools are facing. Nevertheless, with the modern technology, even more tricks can be done to break the laws. That's why we should pay more attention in controlling them from over reacting.
In general, teenagers are both the future and danger of a country, but we can minimize these problems by some possible solutions. The behaviour of teenagers are mostly depend on the surrounding environment, so the most possible solution that we need to take action immediately is to change to the way how we act upon teenagers. We should spend more time understanding them so that we could have a clearer view on what they are thinking. Moreover, teenagers tend to show off and they want to be the best. We should teach them how to show off correctly such as the way they can prove themselves through intelligent competition.
In conclusion, we should have a look at the aspect of a teenager in order to understand them and teach them what they have done wrong. We shouldn't tell them what to do but instead show them what they should do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85386819484 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70949594897 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.921920961 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172604366387 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566269344232 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497207425209 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951445676195 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367787185637 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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