some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, the phenomenon of learning a foreign language has aroused a controversy. Although a vast majority claim that learning soon has a detrimental effect on their mother tongue, others argue such issues are both beneficial and constructive. I am inclined to believe that international language is competent if a number of considerations take into account. I will explore these two prevailing views throughout this essay.
Admittedly, the tremendous benefit offered by educating another language is that it can improve children self-confidence to a large extent. According to a relevant survey, an eminent scientist cites, there is a negative correlation between learning language and interpersonal skill. Thus, it cannot cause complication irrespective of circumstances.
On the other hand, however, not all aspects of learning language are harmful, the irreversible damage to native language should not be ignored. Moreover, enhancing children ability perform a crucial role in their future. To illustrate the point, consider the research carried out by a prestigious university into this matter providing a context in which education can be conceived well. Hence, it can pose a serious threat if we have a preconceived notion on this matter.
to sum up, without any fear of contradiction, we should perceive learning as a discernible trend. To tackle peer pressure, not only do we need a profound insight into all underlying factors, we also require to advocate an innovative approach to solve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... preconceived notion on this matter. to sum up, without any fear of contradicti...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advocating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: advocating
...all underlying factors, we also require to advocate an innovative approach to solve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53017241379 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24952834316 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5631495542 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140857346311 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467978179527 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334060904949 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769874824292 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292592924466 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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